tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417850843973944836.post2938961725540468161..comments2024-02-27T00:19:14.984-08:00Comments on Burning Zeppelin Experience: EmpireMarkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16741134687274260833noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8417850843973944836.post-68818035496813458602012-05-05T17:22:46.121-07:002012-05-05T17:22:46.121-07:00I dunno, I think it's relatively complete, as ...I dunno, I think it's relatively complete, as an idea. I can't tell from what we have which way the narrator would choose, though, and the story isn't really structured to make that ambiguity the point. I think defining his/her response wouldn't hurt things, and would make it feel less like an introductory paragraph. <br /><br />Nothing wrong with intro paragraphs, though. I turn my snippets into full stories all the time.Scattercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00302815654553659644noreply@blogger.com