Thank you for offering your story to Orson Scott Card's Intergalactic Medicine Show. We're sorry to tell you that we will not be using it; you are free to submit it elsewhere.
The Doom of Thraknar
Also, I'm still alive, just too busy to breathe.
I'll take a stab at editing and re-editing that story (once I start breathing again) and send it out again.
Also, this blog is still alive. I promise! Watch this space in August.